Little One

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One girl named love.

Why she came and why she’s gone.

Sunset tea without her.

You gone but questions left.

Unanswered and untold.

Everything changed.

Seen the changing Power .

On the roof with a full Moon light.

A touch and a cry.

With a chocolate and a card.

I found my Paradise.

All over me and all over you.

A bad idea with a Princess.

Gathered but shattered.

                                                 -AKSHAY SWAMI

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4 comments on “Little One”

  1. Lost love? I guess, you loved her very much, and she left without a reason. 😬 Please explain these lines,
    “A bad idea with a Princess.
    Gathered but shattered.”

    Also, you know I noticed one unique thing about your poems. Every line paints a different picture in the reader’s mind, a different thought, a different story. 🤔 The lines seem to function independently as well as together. Your poems are like the fast-forward scenes in movies, hehe. So many images, overlapped on one another! I love it. 🌼

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    1. The author is trying to feel the pain of separation here. As it is a lost love ….which is gone so it was a bad idea with d princess. When someone is broken……it’s shattered and moving on is gathered. (Piece of hearts).
      Oh Thanks a lot Chandni for d appreciation…..glad you liked it.😇

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